2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing succeeds without a strong will.Many succeful people have a strong will,a strong will is when not say 'No' in trouble,they believe themselves. There are three resons for why the people with a strong will maybe succeeful.First,they not give up when they in trouble,they continue doing things that they think alright.Second,they more esy than others to get a job,many companys need the worker with strong will.Third,in glob wold compition everwhere. Not only works but also student need buid a strong will.If we students don't study hard we will do nothing.So we must have a strong will.