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There is a heated discussion whether digital product benifit our life.Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this inssue? Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to person. Some maintain that digital product is very useful.As well konwn,digital age has came ture.Everyone has digital product,such as mobilphone,computer,camera and so on. All off us love the digital products,bucause it very prompt and conveint.Expecially mobilephone,it help us communicate with others.