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There is a heated discussion whether digital product benefit our life.Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue? Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to person. Some maintain that digital product is very useful.As well konwn,digital age has come true.Everyone has digital product,such as Mobile phone,computer,camera and so on. All off us love the digital products,bucause it very prompt and conveint.Expecially Mobile phone,it help us communicate with others.