文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
There is a heated discussion whether digital product benefit our life.Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue? Definitely not,actually,opinions vary from person to person. Some maintain that digital product is very useful.As well known,digital age has come true.Everyone has digital product,such as Mobile phone,computer,camera and so on. All off us love the digital products,because it very prompt and conveint.Especially Mobile phone,it helps us communicate with others.