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Should We Be Ecnonmical When you turn on the TV or surf internet,you can always find that folks like debateing why people are not aware of saving money,but I don't agree with that viewpoint As we know that modern economy has abundant market categories.Resturant provides group-buy deal.It make consumers can enjoy a great discount.Department store start their business on the internet.Cyber shopping is much convenience than traditional retailing.Teenagers who has fashionable-mined extremly enjoy purchaseing on website.To the last generation,most of them,their attitude has became inclusivetoward the new patterns of business activities.So a trend can be predicted that electric business will be instead of traditional patterns,and folks will spend much money on each kind of consumption Acctually,it is not necessery for us to worry about the phenomenon.Young generation certainly cost more money than the previous generation,however modern business style improved people's lifequanlity.We shouldn't asked them to be economical A commonsense tell us that a large number of consumers could stimulate national economy
