2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。

With the repid development of technology and improvement of life standard,more and more people are being on the way to suceess.But the way are variaty,they get different way to success. Some people's way are very easy,but others' are very hard.However, it all depends on your choice.If we want to go a easy way to success, we should do many preparations.Firstly, you should set a goalthat not too big or too small,which is suitable for you. Secondly,you should make a scheme,which includes the things that you should do and when you do it.Firstly,you should make a conclusion that can contants what you have finished and what problems you meet,and what you have acquired.Then,you will be success. In fact,everyone want to be sucess,the way is just do what you want.Then you will see the success is coming.