2004年考研英语作文真题:终点又是起点

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above pie chart,we can observe distinctly that the U.S.budget is spent in six aspects involved in human resources,general government,physical resources,current and past military and Iraq