Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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People on their smartphones Now,with the development of economy and science and technology,smartphone is becoming more and more popular among people. The phenomenon has some reasons.First of all,living standards of people is raising,which I think it`s an important reason.Smartphone can provide all kinds of amusements such as playing games,listening to music and so on.What`s more,we can search information which we want on the smartphone on matter when and where. Smartphone make our life colorful.As we all know,every coin has two sides.First,people focus their eyes on their smartphones too long is unfavorable for their eyes.Besides,they often ignore what happen around them.What`s worse,it`s dangerous that people use their smartphones on the road. In a word,making full use of smartphone helps us live better.