Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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People on Their Smartphone Nowadays,on roads,restaurant,bus and school,It is easy to see people who are playing with their smartphones. There are many factors that may account for the reason why the smartphone are very common in our daily life.First of all,we can listen to the music and watch TV by them.More importantly,boys who can play games and chat on QQ.For girls,who like go shopping can do it on them.Most important of all,smartphones are all-round tools. In a word,smartphones take important part of our life.They are very convenience.However,it takes our lots of time to play with them,so that we have no time to communicate with our friends face to face.Now,we should make use of smartphones.