2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Thanks to the development of science technology,computer enjoy the popularity among the public.No one can avoid being infulenced by the computer.Much as we may proud of how we love traditional way of life,computer has subtle influence on our life.however,nowadays a worrying problem has sprung up:man will be think like the computer.