2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

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In the last ten years,there are increasing number of people in a city choose to travel out.As the chart above,we can learn that there were 10 thousand people going for travel in 1995,and almost 40 thousand people went for vacation in 2000.however,after five years,there were over 120 thousand people doing it. Why there are so many people like to go for a trip?This may attribute to the economy development.In the last ten yeas,since our country becoming more and more strong,the people's living standard have been raised.What's more,the tour has also developed better,therefore,more people enjoy going for travel. The phenomenon would raise the development of the tour economy.Besides,people living there would become happier and happier.