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【题目要求】
100 years ago, human race believed we would make continue progress in all areas of life. Today, some people feel less certain about this. what areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we haven't developed?
【点评一】
本题是2009年5月21日的话题，属于抽象类话题。抽象类话题看似难写，实际上只要转换成具体话题就容易手了。进步的领域：科技，教育。仍需改进的领域：环保，犯罪，人口老龄化，动物保护，文化语言保护。本题几乎无所不包，雅思写作题库中几乎所有话题都能用于本题。
【点评二】
题目 Some people think the human race has made continual progress in all areas of life, while others believe that there is less certainty about this. What areas of progress human race has made? What else areas we have not developed?
一些人认为人类在各方面已经取得了不断的进步，而另外一些人认为并非如此。人类在哪些领域取得了进步？哪些领域没有取得发展？
开头段 How to make a better life never fails to capture people’s attention throughout much of the human history ,which serves as a catalyst for the continuing development in every aspect of life. Some people, however, believe that the so called “development” cannot be regarded as real progress.
中间段1 回答第一问：人类在哪些领域取得了进步？ 1. 众所周知，几个世纪以来，人类一直致力于通过发展科技来改善生存环境。
It is commonly believed that human beings have been striking for improving living conditions by evolving science and technology for many centuries.
【论证示范】
Due to the convenient transportation system, citizens in China are able to enjoy fresh American lemons which were once not available to Chinese or people in many other counties. Communication modes mainly relied on writing letters in the past also witnessed a significantly transformation with the advent of internet, making friends or families enable to contact each other instantly by their computers or tablets.2.其次，与过去相比，人类在医学领域取得了许多突破。
Furthermore, compared with the past , there are many breakthroughs having been achieved in medical care.
中间段2 回答第二问：哪些领域没有取得发展？ 1. 污染，全球变暖，物种灭绝等环境问题已经成为很多国家头痛的问题，它们经常会陷于经济发展和生态平衡的困境中。
Environmental problems in terms of pollutions, global warming ,species extinction and so forth, have been a great headache to most nations who always trap into a dilemma between economic development and ecological balance. 2.各个种族和宗教间的武装冲突是一个持续性的问题，这对世界的和平与和谐造成了威胁。
Arm conflict among various races and religions is another endless problem posing a large threat to world peace and harmony.
结尾段 To sum up, although a lack of knowledge concerning how to control human desire seems to be a big handicap to human civilization, it should be admitted that we have made a great progress in many fields , and the advancement is expected to continue.
从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了；请作者增加词汇丰富度，加强拼写检查；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Since 100 years ago,some area of human race have developed but others was not.Science,technology,education and medical treatment are what developed very well in areas life of human race. Unfornaturally ,the crime and environment was worse then before. For,science, human race can send individual to the moon and other planet ,they can search some material new from the soil which was bring from another planet. They can learn another planet's climate ,sunrise and sunset from book or some video that the astronaut bring back.The education is another area that human race developed. In form world, only a few people can read book , draw a picture and learn the second language. Now,everyone who live in this world can learn this.In my opinion,this is the greatest development since 100 years ago or much more.Because of education ,people konw more about the world ,the mythtress is decrease and people live more happy . The crime is the biggest problem so that people not resolve it well since 100 years ago. It has many war or civil war in history. The frist world war and the second world war is the two biggest war in our world ,it cause the uncertain damange in ecomices and environment.Refer from environment, our environment is worse than ever before, rainforesr is decreasing quickly and the kinds of the animal is less than ever before. To sum up,look at the our progress in this area,we should think about our methods of the developed and adjust it.
