2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅；采用了一些简单的从句；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且检查文中的拼写错误。

Nowdays,more and more people own the computers.And it's more convenient for us in our ilfe by using computer. Firstly,It can save more time if we use computer rather do th things by ourself .We can share more things with our friends who live other places in the computer.The most important is that it's more conficient to do work with computer. Even though it can bring more convenience in our life,it will do harm to our health. It is best for us to control the using time ,then we can protect our eyes and skin. Anyway,we still believe that it's a good tool for us.And we advice that people can use the co,puter properly.