2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(6):最美好的时光

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；可适当增加从句使用，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

When considering this issue, what is important to me is one teacher that i hold respect for tremendously. There are many reasons for my looking up for him, as listed below. The first reason is that he is extremely humorous, which attracts my interest in English. In his class, exhausted sometimes i am for attending too many other classes, i can still pay attention to what he imparts to me and comprehend it easily and clearly, since he can explain it in a vivid way. The second reason is that he does care about me. Whenever i am in low spirits, he will discover it very soon. Then, he will ask me to his office so as to know what happens and try to help me. I still remember one day i was very down because my grandfather got cancer. I was very anxious and sorrowful. The teacher noticed it and asked me to his office. After he got to know the situation, he consoled me by saying that my grandfather would recover. After that, i regained happiness and amused my grandfather. He was successfully cured in the end and all of my family are very happy. It is him that leads me to the land of English kingdom and i am enchanted with beauty and sultly of the language. it is still him that helps me keep positive to life. It is still him that saves my grandfather from cancer. On the threshold of my graduation, i will show my gratitude and appreciation for her kindness, which was, is and will be always wanted to do,