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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(6):最美好的时光

发布时间:2013-10-24 17:05浏览次数:1086
要求:
高中生活是人一生中最美好的时光,除了学业之外,我们还经历、感悟了许多。为了在毕业前不留下遗憾,我们在搞好备考复习的同时,是不是还该做点什么?请根据提示的要点写一篇英语短文,谈谈你的想法。
向老师表示感谢?跟对你有误解的同学谈一谈
征求同学的宝贵意见?再为班级做件有意义的事
注意:
1.可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。

2.短文的单词数:80―120(开头已给出不计入单词总数,不必重写)


High school is regarded as the best time of my life. Besides classes and homework, there’s something more that I especially treasure. In order to leave school with no regrets, 
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Considering this issue, what is important to me is one teacher that i hold respect for tremendously. There are many reasons for my looking up for him, as listed below. The first reason is that he is extremely humorous, which attracts my interest in English. In his class, exhausted sometimes as i am for attending too many other classes, i can still pay attention to what he imparts to me and comprehend it easily and clearly, since he can explain it in a vivid way. The second reason is that he does care about me. Whenever i am in low spirits, he will discover it very soon. Then, he will ask me to his office so as to know what happens and try to help me. I still remember one day i was very down because my grandfather got cancer.At that time, I was very anxious and sorrowful. The teacher noticed it and asked me to his office. After he got to know the situation, he consoled me by saying that my grandfather would recover. After that, i regained happiness and amused my grandfather. Meanwhile, he was successfully cured in the end and all of my family are very happy. It is him that leads me to the land of English kingdom and i am enchanted with beauty and sultly of the language ;it is still him that helps me keep positive to life. ; and it is still him that saves my grandfather from cancer. On the threshold of my graduation, i will show my gratitude and appreciation for her kindness, which was, is and will be always wanted to do. In conclusion, he is the teacher that i admire most and I love him.

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