2.短文的单词数:80―120(开头已给出不计入单词总数,不必重写)
单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Considering this issue, what is important to me is one teacher that i hold respect for tremendously. There are many reasons for my looking up for him, as listed below. The first reason is that he is extremely humorous, which attracts my interest in English. In his class, exhausted sometimes as i am for attending too many other classes, i can still pay attention to what he imparts to me and comprehend it easily and clearly, since he can explain it in a vivid way. The second reason is that he does care about me. Whenever i am in low spirits, he will discover it very soon. Then, he will ask me to his office so as to know what happens and try to help me. I still remember one day i was very down because my grandfather got cancer.At that time, I was very anxious and sorrowful. The teacher noticed it and asked me to his office. After he got to know the situation, he consoled me by saying that my grandfather would recover. After that, i regained happiness and amused my grandfather. Meanwhile, he was successfully cured in the end and all of my family are very happy. It is him that leads me to the land of English kingdom and i am enchanted with beauty and sultly of the language ;it is still him that helps me keep positive to life. ; and it is still him that saves my grandfather from cancer. On the corners of my graduation, i will show my gratitude and appreciation for her kindness, which was, is and will be always wanted to do. In conclusion, he is the teacher that i admire most and I love him.