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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇。
How to use our money rationally In modern time,there are so many approaches to buy what we want.such as shopping on line,group-buy,but,I want to say that we should consume rationally. First of all,I personally,think it is a bad habit to collect all kinds of coupons ,because they can make us pour more and more money to buy or eat something,before long we will find that we spend much money than ever.secondly,group-buy is jusk like a drug,we will be addicted with it,we feel that it is very cheap and convenient.It,actually,is a trail. In short,we had better not buy something without considering.We should learn to consume rationally.