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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33610[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇。

用户练习作文:

How to use our money rationally In modern time,there are so many approaches to buy what we want.such as shopping on line,group-buy,but,I want to say that we should consume rationally. First of all,I personally,think it is a bad habit to collect all kinds of coupons ,because they can make us pour more and more money to buy or eat something,before long we will find that we spend much money than ever.secondly,group-buy is jusk like a drug,we will be addicted with it,we feel that it is very cheap and convenient.It,actually,is a trail. In short,we had better not buy something without considering.We should learn to consume rationally.

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