2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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People and Computer As we all know,computer is an excellent invention in our life With the help of computer,we can do most of things easily.Frankly speaking, computer make our world become an earth village.In nowadays, we can contact our friends from thousands of miles through Internet.Computer can appliation in many fields ,such as education ,economic,shopping, medical, and so on.In a word,computer bring us a lot of convenience. As an old going says, every coins has two sides.Some people are addicted to computer games and use computer to do some illegel thing . By using computers, their ruin up themselves .In other words ,computer is like a killer to them. In my opinion ,we should use computer in proper ways.Only in this way,we can live a happy life.