题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;文章词汇表达丰富,若多用学术词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了。
Trust is between human beings without doubt.But today a problem seems to come up that we has been losing our belief on others gradually,which does trigger some discussion on how to maintain the trust between you and me. As far as i am concerned,there are several things we should keep our promise so as not to lose our trust day by day.first of all,when someone else comes up that he needs help,do not mean to offer him what he needs when anything is under your control.As a human,we ought to own our sypathy as well as conscience,which is the basic character of our human being.secondary,avoid yourself show so much impatience to others.As we know,people is such an animal that has a unfasten tight with dignity,which means that once they feel nebbish for you,they are tending to get away from you,thus,the trust between you two are fading little by little.The last but not least,when someone is trapped in a dilemma,go and give your hand to him,in order not to disapper the trust ,it is vital for us believing others and providing them help. All in all,it is imortant to maintain our trust,not only because it keeps bond with our daily life ,but we all need such a thing to warm our busy heart.