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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
Nowadays,with the development of social ,honest become more and more important.however,an increasingly number of people ignore honest,which have a grave effect on the development of social. It is well known to us all that honest is the most essential moral character.These are many advantages for honest.It was accepted generally that if you aren't honest ,other people don't trust you.besides,honest could give you wealth.last but not least.if you would like to a good reputation,honest is necessary.generally speaking,we should are honest. As for as I am concerned,these are not honest in the social having a serious effect on development of social.So,government should take some effective measures to improve it .we are also try our best to become honest.
