2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；学术词汇的积累方面还有很大的空间，另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

protecting is more importent now. creating a green campus is not only to make the compus more beautiful ,also make the students healther and promot the relation of importence of protecting the environment. a green compus does not only indicate that it have very much trees and flowers,also contain the clean environment and the friendly behavier of the students.when we have a good compus, we will have a better sence and make better study. in order to make our compus green we should do it from ourselvies.don't throw away the robish.remember to turn off the light when to go out. don't make the water free to go away if each students can do these,our compus will becom a very beautiful and friendly place.