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Nowadays,with the development of social,honest become more and more crucial.However,an increasingly number of people ignore honest,which have a grave effect on the development of social. It is well known to us all that honest is the most essential moral character.Honest has many advantages as follows.It was accepted generally that if you aren't honest,other people don't trust in you.Besides,honest could give you wealth.Last but not least.If you would like to a good reputation,honesty is necessary.On the whole,we should be honest. As far as I am concerned,these are not honest in the social having a serious effect on development of social.So,government should take some effective measures to improve it.We should pay attention to honest,too.
