2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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as an old saying goes that "no pains,no gains",nothing succeeds without a strong will.as we all know ,helen keller is a blind and deaf woman,but even under such circumtances ,she realized her dream.the cost she pays is more than the common people,but what she achieved is marvelous.If a people has a strong will ,he will overcome the difficulties and finally blossom into a hero,undertaking the glorious tasks .so it is with our students.roman cannot be built in a day,during the process we fight for our dreams, there is no denying that we will meet many challenges.under no circumstances will a man without a strong will become a complished man.only we work hard and have a strong will can we be bold to exprience the difficulties ,taking control of our own destiny.