邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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how to improve school safely ,recently ,there are many fighting in campus. we all felt sorry for it.i think every school should has a security guard who can give students and teachers safe . it is useful to stop campus fighting and so on . i hope that campus can pay more attention to it.