雅思写作范文:手机与因特网

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Today smart phone has easy to connect the internet to find the article, information that you want. Internet expended the smart phone's function. For example you can get the navigation to lead you how to go to you want to go from internet. You can take a picture by smart phone and upload the picture to the internet to share it with your friends. Almost of the smart phone application used by internet, if smart phone separate from internet, do you continue to use the smart phone?