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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:03浏览次数:5949
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.

Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

有人说住在乡下会比城市好。你怎么看?给出具体原因。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
评语:

学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,还请注意单词拼写的检查;有效的运用了一些复杂句;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Nowday, we can get imformation by various approach-Internet,book,or even from our friends and familyl.Therefore,some people argue that learning by reading is a convenient way to get knowledge. Maybe it is true to this point.However,I personally think the better way for me is learing by doing something. learning by doing can strengthen our memory so that we can ensure the knowlede you learnt is really grasped by ourselves.Epecially medical student,if they just read the textbook about the poisition of the organ or the distribution of the veseel.How do they become a real doctor? How do they have an operation on their patient? Obvisouly,they must have to conduct many experiment on the modle of body,seeing the direction of the organ or trying to dissect some small animal like frogs and rabbits.Only in this way can they comprenhensite the knowledge and descrease the mistakes.If they had not learnt by doing,they might not be able to master that knowledge by heart , resulting in deadly damage. We can learn more by doing something.When we learn something new,there maybe some unpredicalbe event durimg the process,as a result we can not only learn the knowledge we intend to learn but also can get more additional knowlege dealing with the unpredicable event.I was once a seller selling TV called "Sonny".My major is matketing,so I want to utilize the skill learned from the textbook.Atually, things is out of my control,I found the skill I learn from the book was a little unflexible.In real world,the situation is much complex, which beyong the book can tell you.Books,tellig you how to commubicate with customers or how to impress them,while in reality,the skill you learn can not work.You should change you stratyges with diferent conditions and you should try to understand what comsters want before they tell you,which means you should practise many times.Duing the intership, I foud it islearning by doing that can benifit me.After nuberous times I tried did I undertand communicating with customers effectily .As a result ,I sell a lager amount of TV . Grantly,learning by reading maybe is also benifit us because it can save our time,understaing a theory only takes 30 minutes or so. As for me,being a student who learn matketing. I think learning doing is much better for me .Not only are matketing students , lots of people whose mayjors are engenering , computer or technology .In other word ,pratise make perfect, only we have more practice can we really grasp the thing we have learnt. In short,learning by doing not only can help us enderstanding the knowledge deeply but also help us learn others skiil. Can not we deny that it is a good way to learn?

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