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周六上午做作业,下午打扫房间后玩了一会电脑游戏;周日上午和朋友去公园踢足球,下午去参加好朋友Tom 的生日聚会。
希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句数量偏少，应增加文中从句和复合句的使用；请注意分段。
Last week,my brother had a bad time! He went to his friends birthday party,there are many people he does not know,it dose not matter,my brother always smile on his face.At first,he talked to someone who are friendly,and ate lots of food,drank lots of water.He is really shy,he would rather stay at home and read a good book than went to a party.
