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2010年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(58):英语角

发布时间:2013-10-21 17:53浏览次数:365
要求:

假如你叫李华,昨晚你班同学王林在英语角跟你聊天时表示他希望能进一步提高自己的英语交 际能力,因此你决定给他写一封英文电子邮件,谈谈你的建议。

要点如下:

1.扩大知识面,多了解所学语言国家概况;
2.注意语言交际的趣味性;

3.恰当地使用手势语。


要求:
1.陈述所持观点的理由;

2.词数:120字左右。


Dear Wang Lin,
_______________ 
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Dear Wang Lin, I agree with you that it is really important for us to improve our ability to communicate in English. Here are some of my suggestions on how to go about it . Firstly, I think ,you should learn more about English speaking countries so that you can make yourself more interested in studying English. In addition, when others talk about something about English-speaking countries, you can join in and share their own ideas. Secondly, you should try to develop a sense of humor! This can ensure that you have more fun when talking with others. Thirdly, you should learn to use body language properly and keep lively when communicating with others. Sometimes you may find that you can’texpress yourself clearly, in which case body language can help you a lot. I hope these may help you . Sincerely yours LI Hua

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