2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Nowday,parents do anything from their children.It has become a very common. For example children 12 years old whom go to school by his parents.parents always overdoing in taking care of their children.However it is not advantaged to children to grow up. well how is the parent do.First encouraged them and let them do something witch can do by themselfy. Besides,teach the knowledge about how to care themselfy when at home alone.Last but not least talk children"If you do something error you should pay the responsibility