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作者词汇基础扎实；从句使用量稍显不足；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
Which mean of traffic do you prefer when you have a plan to enjoy a journey? Cars, airplanes or others, different people have different options, so does the statement. As for me, the statement is open to doubt. Admittedly, the invention of automobiles has substantially improved the quality of people’s life and thoroughly changed the way of our living. In the old days, if you want travel from Taiyuan to Beijing, you have to spend several days on the road and prepare enough food. But nowadays, you only need several hours by car, How thrill the thing is. Clearly, It is the car that make our life more convenient！ However, it is unfair to say that cars have more influence on society than airplanes. I live in Beijing of China and I am applying for a commitment to pursuit my doctor degree of biochemistry of Harvard University. Fortunately, I am approved to be a student of Harvard University and planning going to America. How do I get there? By car? Of course not. In fact, you have to choose the airplane as the only vehicle. Not only the little time spending on the expenditure, but also the convenience make the airplane as your priority. In addition, with the development of globalization, more and more global meeting, such as General Assembly, G8 Summit, etc. are held every year to promote to address the world’s problem though cooperating. Obviously, the leaders prefer to by airplanes to take part in the meeting. In this sense, the airplanes considerably impact our life rather than cars. In summary, the opinion that cars have greater effects on society than airplanes is prejudice. Absolutely, they play an equally important role in our life.
