2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者词汇表达不够灵活，拼写错误比较多；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Computer and Man As we all know,computers become more and more imporent in our life.It likely to be a part in our life. Nowaday,computer is used to every part of life,for example school teaching,fatrary,invention and so on.Computer plays a impront jobs.It could get in teach with two person all over the world.