2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Nowadays, more and more people move into the cities. They settled down expecting their wonderful future life; however, things are out of expectation. The quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Let's find out the causes and solutions of it. As for the causes of the sliding life quality, we can consider three aspects that is enviromental polution, health problems, and work pressure. Today, especially in large cities, the environment was poluted because it aways give way to economic development. Without a good environment, it is easy to cause health problems. For example, the air we breath has closed relation with some disease. Besides, people working in the large cities usually have to do their jobs overtimes and they also worked under great pressure for their behavior closely connected with the profit of company.