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Name: Li Lei
Age:14
Likes: basketball, swimming, drawing, musicFavorite star: Michael Jordan
Favorite food: fish and chips
Appearance: short and straight hair, big eyes, medium, height
Wants: a basketball player
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I have a good friend，His name is LI Lei。He 14 years old，but he younger than me。he likes basketball ，swimming，drawing and music。he playes basketball is best in our class。He favorite star is Michael Jordan， He favorite food is fish and chips. I can make a lough to him he very friendly。This is my friend。
