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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(69)写作:我的朋友李雷

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Name: Li Lei                    

Age:14

Likes: basketball, swimming, drawing, music

Favorite star: Michael Jordan         

Favorite food: fish and chips

Appearance: short and straight hair, big eyes, medium, height

Wants: a basketball player


I have a good friend,   
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I have a good friend I have a good friend. His name is Li Lei ,he is 14 years old he have short and straight hair , a cuple of big eyes . he always play basketball when he free . because he like playing the basketball very much , and he want to become a basketball player . his hobby is very widely . swimming ,drawing , listening to the music and so on.

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