2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(1):饮食爱好

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The drinks is beter water ,because they drink well and can rplenish nutrition .They which is good thing are good for you . Eating fruit which is nutritious can replenish and is good for your face . If you ask me which I prefer .I can say I prefer fruit .Because the fruit is good for us and can not fat .