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假设你是李华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头和结尾已给出。
信中必须包括以下内容：
1．18岁生日后自己的感觉或体会
2．对父母表示感激3．今后的打算
作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；请注意分段。
When my eighteen-year-old birthday was over,I felt I had already grown up.So It is my time to be a responsibility person ,who can be devoted to the society.Every time when I remember all the things you have done for me,all the love you have given,I am always moved so much.But all I can say is "Thank you so much ,parents,I love you."Now that I am a dult,i should think about my future.Actually ,long time ago,i was dreaming of being a doctor because the job can save many peoples lives.All in all,i will study hard to achieve my goal.
