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Money always plays a essential role in our daily life.Without money we definitely can not manage lots of things. As a result,many person confine their money on the speding.They prefer to seeking all means they think which are sensible to save money like coupons and group-buy deals.In most tome,these so-called preferential policy are not truly cheaper than the exterior price. They hardly imagine that they potentially shape the idleness of satisfying themselves and lose the passion of chasing higher ideas.I am not approve of extravagance and waste but inspire people to bravely comsumer the right things as a reward for the sweat and tears.What is the point in making money?Of course is consuption.Obviously,how to deal with the money?As i mentioned before,we can use the coupons,look for group-buy deals and other reasonable ways.However,we can not lose the ability of consuption.In other words,we can get the innerl happiness form buying a new clothes instead of taking a discount and heal our low spirit and cheer ourselves up. To be a wise consumer and don't make yourself hard.Choose a suitable consumption pattern which is adapt to your finacial situation.Be a ratioal cunsumer then you are the half wise consumer.
