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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19620
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above pie chart,we can observe distinctly that it depicts the proportion of dogs in a dog competition in seven different groups of dog breeds including sporting,working,hound,terrier,toy,non-sporting and herding. The chart consists of seven segment,the largest on representing sporting group,which accounts for 24% of the total.Working group takes up 21%,becoming the second largest.Hound group and terrier group both get 16%,followed by toy group which makes up 12%.All the rest proportions,11% of all,go to non-sporting and herding groups,constituting 5% and 6% respectively. The two most popular groups of dogs,namely working and sporting groups,account for almost half of the dogs in the competition.The total fo the two least popular ones,or non-sporting and herding groups,is less than toy group,the third most unpopular one.Moreover,four times as many dogs competed in the sporting group as in the herding group. It can be seen from the chart that people attending the dog competition favor sporting and working dogs more than other groups.

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