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2013考研英语二图表作文预测:中国城市事故

发布时间:2013-07-05 15:54浏览次数:2873
要求:

The table below gives information about the numbers of accidents in a Chineses City in 2005. Write an essay of 160-200 words. Your essay should

1、describe the accidents in a chinese city

2、possible reasons

3、give your comment

You should write neatly on your ANSWER SHEET2.

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达较准确,学术词汇表达灵活;如若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above bar chart,we can observe distinctly that it illustrates the growth of the U.S.population in urban and rural areas from 1900 to 1990. A little less than 30 million folks lived in urban areas in 1900.This was the lowest number of urban population in the U.S.in the nine decades from 1900 to 1990.Similarly,the lowest number of rural residents was found same year.As the time went by,the number of urban population increased.The rising trend was slightly different from that of the population in rural area.The population increased to a little bit above 50 million in 1980 and kept unchanged from 1980 to 1990. The population in rural areas was larger than that in urban areas in 1900.Since 1920,however,the number of urban residents surpassed that of rural ones.The tendency continued throughout the time span.At last,urban were approximately three times of peasants in 1990. It can be concluded that the number of citizens living in the urban area kept increasing dramatically while that of those in rural areas remained almost the same from 1900 to 1990.The U.S.people seemed to prefer living in cities to in rural areas in the period.

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