字数:200满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文中衔接词丰富。
In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above pie chart,we can observe distinctly that it illustrates the proportion of dogs in a dog competition.In seven different groups of dog breeds including sporting,working,hound,terrier,toy,non-sporting and herding. The chart consists of seven segment,the largest on representing sporting group,which accounts for 24% of the total.Working group takes up 21%,becoming the second largest.Hound group and terrier group both get 16%,followed by toy group which makes up 12%.All the rest proportions,11% of all,go to non-sporting and herding groups,constituting 5% and 6% respectively. The two most popular groups of dogs,namely working and sporting groups,account for almost half of the dogs in the competition.The total fo the two least popular ones,or non-sporting and herding groups,is less than toy group,the third most unpopular one.Moreover,four times as many dogs competed in the sporting group as in the herding group. It can be seen from the chart that inhabitants who attended the dog competition favor sporting and working dogs more than other groups.