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My View on Coupons When it comes to coupons, the majority of people think that coupon can make them buy goods cheaper at other places, isn't it?Form my view, I do not hold the same opinion. Sometimes, it is not always able to help us to buy high quality and inexpensive goods. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that consumer will spend more money to buy useless goods. Coupons is a temptation to spend more money. First of all, consumers ignore the real price of goods. For the vast majority of consumers, they overlook the initial price by virtue of the effects of coupons. For instance, there are many manufactures switch the initial price into higher price, and then give the consumers some coupons. Actually, there are many consumers who buy higher commodity prices. Besides, many manufactures will tell consumers that they can make more discounts if they buy more goods or to buy other things. However, It is common for consumers that they will unconsciously buy more things in order to make more discounts. On the other hand, coupons encourage people to buy useless goods. For example, many manufactures who will ask consumers to buy other goods if they want to get the coupons. In contrast, it is unnecessary for people to buy useless goods. Actually, many people who will buy these products for coupons, What's more, some economists point out coupons is just a usual way of promotion. That is to say, consumers seldom benefit from coupons. As a result, they spend just more money to buy useless goods. All in all,coupons do not mean that we can buy cheaper goods. On the contrary, coupons may mean that you will spend more money, we need refrain from the temptation of coupons. Therefore, which make us to be a clever buyer.