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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33574
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
评语:

学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

My View on Coupons When it comes to coupons, the majority of people think that coupon can make them buy goods cheaper at other places, isn't it?Form my view, I do not hold the same opinion. Sometimes, it is not always able to help us to buy high quality and inexpensive goods. People seem to fail to take into account the fact that consumer will spend more money to buy useless goods. Coupons is a temptation to spend more money. First of all, consumers ignore the real price of goods. For the vast majority of consumers, they overlook the initial price by virtue of the effects of coupons. For instance, there are many manufactures switch the initial price into higher price, and then give the consumers some coupons. Actually, there are many consumers who buy higher commodity prices. Besides, many manufactures will tell consumers that they can make more discounts if they buy more goods or to buy other things. However, It is common for consumers that they will unconsciously buy more things in order to make more discounts. On the other hand, coupons encourage people to buy useless goods. For example, many manufactures who will ask consumers to buy other goods if they want to get the coupons. In contrast, it is unnecessary for people to buy useless goods. Actually, many people who will buy these products for coupons, What's more, some economists point out coupons is just a usual way of promotion. That is to say, consumers seldom benefit from coupons. As a result, they spend just more money to buy useless goods. All in all,coupons do not mean that we can buy cheaper goods. On the contrary, coupons may mean that you will spend more money, we need refrain from the temptation of coupons. Therefore, which make us to be a clever buyer.

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