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We college students,frankly speaking,mainly depend on our parents to live our lives.Since the money we spend is not ours,in my oppinion,we ought to save money as much as possible.And even if we can make money to support some fees,we should also develope such a good habbit. I believe we can make full use of the money we have saved to do more other meaningful things.Take myself for example,I have been cuting my spendings on clothes,snacks and other unneccesary aspects since the beginning of this term,therefore,I put aside some money to purchase the books I appreciate,to buy gifts for the people I care.And I decrease the pressure of my parents for they needn't give me money as much as before.And that's what I want to see. In a word,it's wise for us students to learn to spend money reasonably,we should be smart consumers and hold the green,economical notion of consumption.Make our efforts to save money by gathring various coupons and buying discount clothes.Only when we become used to being careful with our money,can we get a long-term life plan and lead a regular, happy life.
