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2003年1月英语六级作文真题:关于诚实

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:23浏览次数:1002
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1.当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 

2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实

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有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

As is known,honest is virtue in China conventional culture.However,it is comment phenomenon that a lot of dishonest accur in current . There are mainly several premium dishonest situation in oer life.Firstly,as a student,with the view of getting good point,he or she will write follow the exellent student.Secondly, some government workers,they are so pursuit with physical that they do unconscious thing,such as it is bad for most of citizen profit.Last but not the least, some business open an account with his cooperations with bad quality commerdities,which in order to attain more money . In my view,honest is not only good for ourselves ,but also is beneficial for others.Therefore,everyone should be a honest man.On the one hand,it is important for us to get a good reputation and a bright furture.Maybe you get advantage at first time when you are dishonst.But others will never trust in you,which means you lost parnets or friends.On the other hand,honest is significant for our life ,without it ,you will fail to enter into happiness. In a word ,on the basis of to be a honest people,you will won your friendly friends and happiness easily!

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