2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

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The Celebration of Western Festivals Altought we have our chinese traditional festivals,there are an increasing number of people tend to pay more attention to western festivals.It seems to me that the causes of this phenomenon is that a large number of people admire and be curious about western festivals,and this trend may affect us a lot. In positive effect,the celebration of western festivals will help people to know the outside world certainly.As we all know, festival is a big part of a nation's culture.and most of the traditional festivals come from a long history,and we can learn about a country by celebrating its festivals.On the contrary,celebrating the western festivals will give rise to ignore our own traditional festivals,and this phenomenon may be a obstacal for developing our culture. we no need to be against celebrating the western festivals ,but we must put our own traditional festivals on the first position.