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My favorite movie is < X-Men: First Class>. This is the first science movie that I have seen. The movie talked about mutant. Professor X is a leader of mutant and can read others mind. He formed a group named X-men. He taught mutants how to use their power properly and made many plans to defeat enemies. The scenery is fantastic. Especially I saw it in cinema which is 3D movie. After seeing the movie.