2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

On maintaining trust There are many qualities in China ,which are spread by the ancestors from generation to generation.There are important treasure for us,so we should take good use of them.Also,trust is valuable. Nowadays,some people are short of trust.Particularly,some people take advantage of people's trust to earn money.Therefore,some people who are taken in could not maintain trust.Some businessmans sale bad quality of goods.All in all,there are many things that break our trust amony everyone.It is a bad news.However,there has trust in our life ,too. Trust is essential for us ,so we need take some measure to maintain it.Everyone should start from themselves.