题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达丰富度不足,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
On maintaining trust There are many qualities in China,which are spread by the ancestors from generation to generation.There are important treasure for us,so we should take good use of them.Also,trust is valuable. Nowadays,some people are short of trust.Particularly,some people take advantage of people's trust to earn money.Therefore,some people who are taken in could not maintain trust.Some businessmans sale bad quality of goods.All in all,there are many things that break our trust.It is bad news.However,we need trust others in our life,too. Trust is essential for us,so we need take some measure to maintain it.Everyone should start from themselves.