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As is known to all , people's hard work , coupled with some good qualities , like hardiness , will help people make success in future . Though talent you are , you will must fall behind ,for which you are straved of hardiness . As the saying goes , Diligence is the means by which one make up for lack of natural talent by hard work . In the meantime , people with plain intelligence would make great progress if they all along have enough hardiness Students are just as the same . Hardiness will strength our anti-pressure ability to overcome troubles .