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My hometown has changed a lot in the recent years. In the past, there were many trees around the town. The water was clean and many fish swum happily. The houses were poor and the strees were narrow. People hard worked in the field but still very poor. However, many new buildings are built nowadays, plently of viechles run on the road. The industral environment pollution is badly, the trees and fish are reduced gradulally. Now the most important thing is to find the sultion to handle the pollution