小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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she is one of my good friends. i met her in my primiry scholl .her name is Jim. she is beatuiful girl, she is tall and a little fat. why i say she is my good friend? because when i have some trouble, she can give me some useful suggestion and give me favor. she always get along very well with me. we have common interested and hobbies. every weekden we have a appiontment, we have to tell interested thing that happen around us to each other.